A note to the reviewer

Read your section

This is a manuscript sent out for review, not a finished book. I am asking you for one named set of pages rather than all 82. The clinicians and researchers who mark it will be named in the edition that publishes.

Read the manuscript (PDF, 82 pages) Find your section No form. No email required. No fee.

A draft circulated for comment, not the published book. It is information rather than medical advice, and page 2 says what that means. Please do not post it publicly. Full terms.

What I have already done

Every claim was traced back to a primary source, and every source was checked at the journal for existence and year before the claim was graded. That catches invented citations and misremembered numbers. It caught several of mine, and each was fixed before this draft left my hands.

What that cannot catch, and why I am writing to you

A study read correctly and applied to the wrong question. The citation checks out, the number is right, and the conclusion is wrong anyway. I cannot find that from the inside, because the person who made the error is the person checking for it. It is the error that survives longest in a book like this, and it is what I am asking you to look for.

The ask, plainly

Your section, not the whole book

  • Find yourself below and read only those pages. Everything else is someone else's question, and I am asking them separately.
  • Send the page number, the sentence, and the source you think I got wrong.
  • Disagreement is the point. Where it is about evidence, the page changes and you are still listed.
  • There is no fee and nothing to sign.
Before you open it

What a page looks like

Every page in the book is built the same way, so you can find the parts that need you without reading around them.

The anatomy of a page in the manuscript A schematic of one page, with six numbered parts: the running head, the title and standfirst, the body block, a caution box marked in red, the sources line marked in navy, and the running foot with the page number. 1 2 3 4 5 6
  1. The running head. Which part of the book you are in, and what the page is for. Every page carries one, so a page torn out of context still says where it came from.
  2. The title and the standfirst. The claim of the page in one line, then the frame in two. If the standfirst overstates what follows, that is worth telling me.
  3. The body block. Usually a table: the thing on the left, what it does and what to do on the right. This is where the advice lives.
  4. The caution box. Medicines, conditions, pregnancy, and who should not do what the page just recommended. There are twenty-four of these and each sits on the page that triggered it rather than in a table at the back.
  5. The sources line. The studies behind that page, named on the page itself, and graded in the source list from page 77.
  6. The running foot. The standing line that the book is information and not medical advice, and the page number to quote back at me.
Find your section

Eight readings, and no one person should do more than one

Splitting it this way is not politeness. A book like this fails at the seams between fields, and the person who can see a seam is the one standing on one side of it. Each block below is the question only that specialty can answer. The red mark means the reading includes page 69, the warning-signs page, where a wrong line does the most damage in the whole book.

Pharmacy and clinical pharmacology

Pages 23, 31, 32, 34, 37, 42, 43, 44, 47, 49. About an hour.

The book carries twenty-four medicine and condition cautions and they are deliberately scattered, each sitting on the page whose advice triggers it rather than collected at the back. Interactions, spacing intervals, and who should not do the thing the page just recommended. Three questions. Are the intervals right? Is a caution on the wrong page? And the one I most need: is there advice in this book with no caution attached that should have one?

General practice and internal medicine page 69

Pages 8, 46, 47, 63, 69. About an hour.

Page 69 is the warning-signs page, split into same-day and book-an-appointment. Page 8 routes a reader by symptom. Pages 46 and 47 say which numbers to track and how often. What I need: what is missing from page 69, what should not be on it, and anything in the wrong half. Then whether an annual panel is a defensible thing to tell a general reader, because the book itself calls that interval convention rather than a tested schedule.

Sleep medicine

Pages 14 to 23, 55, 59, 64. About an hour.

The whole sleep chapter, plus the racing-mind, jet-lag and shift-work pages. What I need: whether the CBT-I description on page 18 is accurate enough to send someone to ask for it by name; whether melatonin's narrow case is stated too warmly or too coldly; and whether apnea is flagged often enough for a chapter whose advice assumes the airway works. I work in this industry, so read the melatonin and magnesium lines hardest.

Dietetics and clinical nutrition

Pages 25 to 34, 60. About an hour.

The plate, the six nutrients, the gut, and the dinner-circuit page. What I need: whether the protein target is right to give a general adult without knowing their kidney function; whether the fiber and plant-variety advice overclaims; and whether the salt guidance reads as contested when the three bodies quoted broadly agree.

Cardiology and lipidology page 69

Pages 46, 47, 49, 69. Half an hour.

Short and specific. The book prints ApoB 1.0 g/L, a home blood pressure average of 135/85, and 180/120 on repeat as lines to act on. What I need: whether presenting ApoB 1.0 as a general line misleads a higher-risk reader whose target is far lower; whether the one-week window for an asymptomatic 180/120 is right; and whether Lp(a) measured once is the right instruction.

Sports and exercise medicine, physiotherapy

Pages 36 to 44, 66. About an hour.

Strength, aerobic base, intervals, balance, recovery, and the staying-independent page. What I need: whether the interval protocol is safe to publish to an unscreened reader, and whether the clearance line is in the right places; whether the balance and falls advice matches what you would tell someone in clinic; and whether the creatine numbers are read correctly.

Women's health, obstetrics, menopause

Pages 67, 70 to 72. Half an hour.

The across-genders pages, the menopause material, iron, and the new-parent page. The book deliberately gives no pregnancy doses and says so, pointing instead at a booking appointment. What I need: whether that omission is the right call or leaves a reader worse off, and whether the menopause and iron sections are current.

Psychiatry, psychology, crisis services page 69

Pages 62, 67, 69. Twenty minutes.

The shortest read and possibly the most consequential. Page 69 carries the self-harm row and the postpartum psychosis row, with crisis numbers for three countries. What I need: whether the wording of those two rows is right, whether the resources are current, and whether the burnout page sends someone to help soon enough.

Whoever you are

Two things I would ask anyone

Look hereBecause
The grades on page 9, and the source list from page 77 I assigned every tier myself. I am most interested in where you think I have been generous, and in any study I have read more confidently than it deserves.
Anywhere I call something convention Wherever a number is a working rule and not a trial result, the book says so on the page: the half-hour wind-down, the three-hour alcohol gap, the two-day recovery gap, the annual panel, the magnesium dose and timing. Those are the lines I am least sure of. If a trial exists and I have missed it, that is the single most useful thing you can send.
The other way in

If the book cites your paper, there is a shorter question

Every source the book rests on is listed with the exact sentence it carries and the grade I gave it. If your work is in there, you do not need to read the book. The only thing I need to know is whether I have used your finding for something it does not support. That takes about two minutes, and only you can settle it.

See the source list
Being named

What it will and will not mean

It is not an endorsement of every line. I expect disagreement, and where it is about evidence rather than emphasis, the page will change and you will still be listed.

If you would rather read it without being named, say so and I will leave you off.

I will not quote you anywhere, on this site or in the book, without sending you the exact words first and getting your agreement to them.

Who is asking

And the conflict you should know about

I am Chris Ngoi. I am not a doctor, which is why the method has to be the credential rather than the author.

I am in the wellness industry, so I sell into the same space this book covers. I grade supplement categories on the evidence like everything else and I grade most of them down, including the ones I work in. Support comes last in the book and is graded hardest. You should read the manuscript, and this request, knowing that.

How to send it

Page number, the sentence, and the source you think I got wrong, to [email protected].

Marginal notes on the PDF are just as welcome as a list. Anything is better than nothing, and a single corrected line is worth the email.

Read the manuscript (PDF, 82 pages)